Great melody! You're always so good at those. What I would suggest is that you add some variety to your song though. A harmony would be nice, but I would be really cool if you tweaked the melody a bit when you played it again at 2:14. I liked the stop, but I was expecting...more after that. But otherwise it sounded great!
Thank you so much! I'm definitely still working on creating more melodies to a song, I find that I often get too attached to one melody and I can't help but use it over and over. I appreciate the feedback - you'll find each EP of mine gets better and better, so stick around ;)
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